There’s a castle

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    There’s a castle
    There’s a castle
    way up on a hill
    with magical creatures
    coming out of there
    I saw a fair madden
    calling for help
    she had long brown hair
    that she brushed a lot
    sitting in that little room
    hoping to get out
    with those magical creatures
    watching her a lot
    every time she moved
    they would know
    they would smell
    these creatures
    blew fire and flew around
    she was hoping they would fall
    and hit the ground
    here comes a knight
    to save his girl
    from the fierce dragon
    that roamed there
    he came up to it
    and drew his sword
    cut of that dragons head
    and fought some more
    he finely made it to the top
    she reach out to grab him
    and give him a hug
    that was the best
    part of this
    Romanic
    love.  
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    StandingBear commented on There’s a castle

    08-30-2009

    A highly creative castle work with creatures, the dragon, the knight, and the fair maiden. Great write.
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    Tempy commented on There’s a castle

    08-25-2009

    this was beautiful. I like hugs cuddles snuggles and super men
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    blackshadow

    08/25/2009

    tempy your so sweet thank you for reading my poems

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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