The Vision

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    The Vision

    Looking out at creation
    all I can do is sigh
    I am humbled, in awe
    mesmerized by the vision
    gifted to these eyes

    Engulfed by the serenity
    small waves against the shore
    shimmering elegance of dancing light
    leaving me completely a peace
    fueling my desire for more

    In the theater of the cosmos
    the star takes the stage
    performing for the crowd
    a magical moment
    as the artist creates

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    Buffybytes commented on The Vision

    07-25-2011

    A beautifully lighthanded and reverant approach in this stellar piece! (sorry, couldn't resist... lol)
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    danmartyjake1 commented on The Vision

    01-12-2011

    Love the pic... it fits and the words are simple, timeless and eternal ones.
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    cousinsoren commented on The Vision

    09-19-2010

    This is an exquisitely comp[posed piece, Pleasant bit of experiential verses. It induces me to feel the impact of that celebrated and popularly sung hymn, "How Great Thou Art," composed by Stuart K. Hine,' I suggest that RPT 40, study the value of punctuation and practise the art of using it. I need not dwell here on its importance. There are books available on the subject , as well as assistance from the School of Poetry. My rating for all-round excellent poetic features is 10. I would have rated a 10+, if this poem was properly punctuated............LOL.
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    RPT40

    09/25/2010

    Lol - I guess in the future it wouldn't hurt to use some punctuation for you lol - Thank you for your time, and your valued input.

    Marsink commented on The Vision

    09-15-2010

    Its a fine and complete inventory in the survey of your vision! Majestic and celebrated: well stated in artistic strokes of praise. Applause!!
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    jamie7121f commented on The Vision

    09-15-2010

    I really enjoyed the visions and the word play. Great job :)
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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