Clearly Thinking About Confusion

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    Clearly Thinking About Confusion





    I found myself living someone else's dream
    and wondered why someone else is living mine
    In an attempt to hold on to memories
    I missed out on living in present time


    I thought I believed in more than I knew 
    If only I knew what I wanted to find  
    The more questions I ask to find my way
    The more I wander around like I'm blind



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    TinaD commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    01-13-2011

    The poem does give one the gut feeling of confusion. Nice read.
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    tenderpoison commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    01-01-2011

    perhaps one of very favorites of all of yours - and that's saying something. I think I've followed that signpost before....
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    smaffa commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    10-16-2010

    Awesomesauce! Well written - I can't even pick a favorite line because I like each one!
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    RPT40

    10/22/2010

    Thank yousauce!! Lol

    WordSlinger commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    10-11-2010

    lol, this is the hair of the dinosaur, lol, I hear that, good write all around, lol, ty WS, 11 from me
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    RPT40

    10/22/2010

    Lol thanks WS

    Olan01 commented on Clearly Thinking About Confusion

    09-14-2010

    Yes, yes, yes; I know the feeling and so well expressed. This is not an easy poem to write and you do it so vividly. Olan
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