The crossroads of.....

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    • Don't read me, I am not that good.......

    The crossroads of.....

     

     

    The crossroads of time I suppose is an ode
    to life,thought,and relevance in unknown scrolls.
    The gold charmed heart takes waves of rust
    in disgust; I mistrust the element of such.
    Befriended the quiet notion of the sparrow
    narrow, even more shallow dreams unravel
    to create or manifest my true spirit to grab you.
    Listen, my words are just a scattered preserve
    like the seed that becomes the grape vine that wraps and grows.
    Not many holes in the logic of spirits and woes
    so believe the metaphors that travel the globe
    amongst the sky between the ground the unknown astounds
    so appreciate the significance in crossroads of now.

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    SuSpence commented on The crossroads of.....

    04-29-2010

    Great write once again altair...you should change your status to say 'Read me, I am that good' haha. I really like the rhyme scheme here, with multiple rhymes in the same lines, really helped with the flow, and to draw me in to this great read. -Spence
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    knight4696 commented on The crossroads of.....

    04-08-2010

    Crossroads of now ...hmmm - I read this as a deep metaphor of a state of being. A realization that one comes too when a dramatic event occurs in ones life, Correct me if I'm wrong - But it's what I got out of this, :) I could be way off - it certaily wouldn't be the first time! lol! :) Great job! :) Ken
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    Altair

    04/08/2010

    Ken, if anyone knows what I am about when I write, it is you my friend, you always tend to know my expressions well, this is favored, I mean come on, in the dark you still found the nature of I haha. Thanks as always and good to see you back around

    SuperChick76 commented on The crossroads of.....

    04-06-2010

    wow, a short poem, this is a first. lol. Beautifully written. "to create or manifest my true spirit to grab you. Listen, my words are just a scattered preserve." Brilliant. Just brilliant.
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    Altair

    04/06/2010

    lol, yes it is quite short compared to the others you have indulged in, glad yyou liked it...

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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