An instant revelation of…

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    An instant revelation of…

     

    There is a subtle reminder to life
    I hold dear to me
    As lies turn to the truth
    I remain free
    I hold the winds constant voice of motion in hand
    One grain of sand cause a life to expand
    One instance one resistance to faith of others
    but behold the truth in a mind that smoothers
    Reasons of thought when rapture reappear in a mirror
    then disappear in jeer of my spirit endeavor
    Nature, life, one beholds the pith
    that upends the blessed to soul enrichment
    Lets share in a view so commonly new
    a mindful consent reach a casual few
    Appreciation of everything, gift of life  
    I behold my own spirit, then reflect on it's strife

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    knight4696 commented on An instant revelation of…

    04-08-2010

    Altair - The metaphoric master strikes again! :) Nice work ~ A short poem - but yet so filled with self reflection. Very Nice!! :) Ken
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    Altair

    04/08/2010

    you flatter me all to well, but don't stop it brings a smile in appreciation..stay tuned I have been savoring the views of the master musician...

    Marsink commented on An instant revelation of…

    04-08-2010

    This is quite a grand treatment of introspection! (inclusive of the perception of others) Reminds me of someone who I don't really know well, but enjoyed their writing. You have blanked an array of emotion to uncover each in candor and descript images for the reader to discover in empathy!
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    Altair

    04/08/2010

    mars, if you recall the comment on your profile from the first question, you shall find within yourself that your inquiries are fruitive in thought..it is I you think to believe so. Thank you so much for your comment, always enjoyed your inclusion as well as your expressions...

    Madelynn commented on An instant revelation of…

    04-06-2010

    One grain of sand cause a life to expand-Love this! I have a piece I wrote with the same concept as this one line.So very true.-I love the intensisty and deep thought you displayed in this write..it seems you are a very deep thinker mystery poet!-Key ingedients to master writing..I look forward to reading this work. -Maddi
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    Altair

    04/06/2010

    thanks for accepting my friend request and indulging in my expression as well, it's the second prose to a series of three, the third is coming soon, glad you like it...

    SuperChick76 commented on An instant revelation of…

    04-06-2010

    And I am now all caught up. I'm so proud of me. haha. This one seems almost parallel to the last, with differences of course, but, seems to remind me of it. It was, indeed, a favored read. The last line was a real nice finishing touch. Good write, good read. :)
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    Altair

    04/06/2010

    you are right prodigy for this is the second part to a three poem series so to speak that I wrote, I have yet to post the last one but it is coming..

    Musicmynded1 commented on An instant revelation of…

    04-05-2010

    I like the fabric that you used to sew this, and then there is of course the gown:)
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