The Breakup
The goodbyeso sad
The sorrow
so deep
The emptiness
so cold
The loneliness
so hard
The pain
so raw
The tears
so many
The Breakup
2 Comments
so sad
The sorrow
so deep
The emptiness
so cold
The loneliness
so hard
The pain
so raw
The tears
so many
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Poem Comments
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windsongs commented on The Breakup
08-19-2012
- kinda of a joke, prior comment-this was a great write!
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windsongs commented on The Breakup
08-19-2012
- goodbye, hello-is it me you're looking for-that was a song-I like his all night long a little better-it was a maple tree right-better go check on the cakes!
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