temptations

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once again this poem is based on past events

temptations

To cut or not to cut
the decision is so close together
its like a drug
so powerful
so addicting
I'm trying my hardest to fight it
but its such a release


in the worst way


after i do it i feel so bad
and in order to deal with it
i cut again
its a never ending cycle
it controls me and everything i do
i thought i was over this
but as soon as someone mentions it
i want it
more and more

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Qualin commented on temptations

06-14-2010

GET RID OF THE demon THERE ARE BETTER WAYS,I'M NOT SURE OF GIVING THE devil ANY RECOGNITION IS EXCEPTABLE, BUT AGAIN I HAVE BEEN WRONG MANY TIMES...I JUST CAN'T REMEMBER WHEN...LOL QUALIN

Chaos128 commented on temptations

05-12-2010

A frank exposition of an anguishing condition. It took gut to put this out there.

Dano commented on temptations

04-21-2010

1553 days... this piece is very personal for me and brings up haunting memories of my past... the temptations...still... are almost too much to take some days... but counting forward and a promise that i made keeps the razor off of my skin... thank you for sharing

trainpain commented on temptations

04-21-2010

ya the scars do suck. thanks for the advice.

BringMeBullets commented on temptations

04-21-2010

It's a great write... And I have been there myself... The bad thing about it is that the scars don't go away... You must be careful. There are other ways of getting rid of stress as well, Katie. Don't do something you're going to regret.

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