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please comment on my poem "addiction"

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  • Age: 32
  • Location: private
  • Gender: Female
  • Country: US
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hey my name is Katie i was born in Georgia and have moved a lot 24 times to be exact. i write to release stress and to somehow understand my feelings. Ive been through a lot in my life and you can see that through my writing.
i hope you can some how understand and grasp what has, is, and will go on in my life through my writing.

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Dano profile comment

04-21-2010

thank you for sharing your words... i will be back to read more of your work
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trainpain profile comment

03-17-2010

thanks for the advice!
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Papa profile comment

03-17-2010

Hey. IT gets better. I promise it does. Just don't read too many sad poems.
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Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

trainpain’s Poems (23)

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My Shining Rock 2 11/11/2010
Im sorry (revised) 0 11/05/2010
Im sorry 2 10/20/2010
i dont care any more 1 10/06/2010
addiction 2 08/23/2010
you will conquere in times of trouble 0 07/13/2010
everything works together 1 06/07/2010
the unwanted birthday 3 05/17/2010
temptations 6 04/16/2010
Target 3 04/08/2010
feelings lost in translation 1 04/07/2010
bitter sweet harmony 2 04/06/2010
change 1 04/06/2010
I will stand firm 0 04/03/2010
out of focuse 2 04/01/2010
why i play sports 1 03/19/2010
Battle 0 03/18/2010
wake me 0 03/17/2010
Twisted World 0 03/17/2010
Mother 0 03/16/2010
The Battle Field 0 03/16/2010
cant you see? 2 03/15/2010
The Helpfull Death 2 03/15/2010
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