Target
This pain is undeniable stabbing me like darts
I wonder why I'm the target of something so dark
this cloud is inevitable always weighing me down
the storm soaks me heart and yet i make no sound.
Target
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Tags: Pain , Dark Poetry
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This pain is undeniable stabbing me like darts
I wonder why I'm the target of something so dark
this cloud is inevitable always weighing me down
the storm soaks me heart and yet i make no sound.
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04-21-2010
- alot of feelings in just a short amount of words... great expression... nicely written
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04/22/2010
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BringMeBullets commented on Target
04-09-2010
- So powerful in such a short write. But I love it. I'll save this to my favorites. To be honest, I think this might be my favorite out of all your work. So far, anyway. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
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