Tear Drops

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    Tear Drops

     As days go by, i tend to cry
    because thoughts of my fututre are very dry
    A lonely cry as the tear drops fall
    and for why they come, i cant recall
    cant survive this painful feeling
    cant take it destroying my very being
    ive drained my body with so many cries
    on some of the days i just want to die..
    i choose to live, for im scared of death
    but ill think of heaven till my last breath
                                      K_P

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    poetrygirl95 commented on Tear Drops

    04-28-2011

    This is all what I feel.. I understand where you are comming from.. But you have to trust that everything in the end will be okay.
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    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    yea though its hard sometimes i try my best and i see you do too

    poetrygirl95

    07/21/2011

    There is always a rainbow after the storm and sometimes it just takes a little while to get here.. thats what I live by.

    killingP13

    07/28/2011

    :) yea i can see it slowing coming into view

    poetrygirl95

    07/30/2011

    Thats a good thing! Remember it always rains hardest on the people who deserve the most sun.

    redbloodink commented on Tear Drops

    04-26-2011

    Happy and sad times pass by the love of God and His mightyness always remains....... Lean on Him I do..... red
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    killingP13

    05/19/2011

    thank you red :)... sorry for the late reply

    angelchaser commented on Tear Drops

    02-11-2011

    I know how you feel, I've been there. Sometimes the pain of life can be too great, but hopefully you'll go on, life is too precious to lose. *hugs*
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    killingP13

    02/11/2011

    im happy and sad that you understand how i feel...i dont wish for anyone to ever feel this kind of pain specially not a kindhearted person like your self thank you for your encouragement

    sevyn7 commented on Tear Drops

    01-27-2011

    This is another heart felt poem, we all go through days when tears flow, from a thought, or sad memories, not sure why they come when they do, but its good to get it out. I guess thats why we write, to get it out, it eases it a little. But the thing to remember is you are loved, by friends, family, and that special person. Stay sweet, Stay strong, and God Bless. Dave
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    thank you so much :)

    Teardrops commented on Tear Drops

    01-21-2011

    you must live to write this wonderful and deep poetry . You have the love now write about it Marie
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