Loving You

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    Loving You

     You stole my heart only in seconds of time
    right in front of my own eyes
    i cant explain the way i now feel
    its so hard to believe, is it just a dream, or is it really real?
    i cant deal with the fact i may not be your only one
    but baby to me you are second to none
    my friends say im a fool, just a puppet on a string
    that i might be in love,but for you im just a fling
    i think there only jealous and just want you for there own
    i hope i have your heart one day, mine youve already stole!
    but yet your not a masked thief but a bandit in the night
    and everytime im sad i just think of you then im alright
    as this poem ends i have only one final thing to say
    i promise my love will grow for you each and every day

               K_P


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    Qualin commented on Loving You

    10-26-2012

    I new you cared but you didnt have to let everyone know exactly how you felt.....you secret admirer....well not very secret any more!! Good one gal!!
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    killingP13

    10/30/2012

    your the best you always put a smile on my face miss you lots :D

    slimgoodwoody commented on Loving You

    01-10-2012

    Great poem, showing the conflict between reality and seeing through the rose colored glasses of love, where all flaws disappear! I enjoyed it!
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    killingP13

    02/13/2012

    a bit late but thank you :)

    Viper89 commented on Loving You

    05-25-2011

    Girl, some advice if I may. Get away from this man today!!! This guy is trouble! I was thesame way, my friends were the same way and it turns out they we're right! Your friends can see more than you when you are blinded by "love"!!!
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    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    thank you for the advice :) i see your going to be a great friend

    Qualin commented on Loving You

    05-19-2011

    NEVER NEVER PLAY SECOND FIDDLE...YOU ALREADY KNOW THE OUT COME...FAILURE ETC.,ETC.,AND SO ON...YOUR FRIEND QUALIN
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    killingP13

    07/20/2011

    sorry i havent been on in such a long time :( things have come up thank you for your support :D miss you! im back

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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