Heartless

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    Heartless

     Though I gave my life to him
    He refused to take it
    And where my heart had been
    A black whole had replaced it
    My words of sorrow and despair
    He refuse to listen to
     with no love and care
    Sadness overcame me too
    Then that dreadful day came
    Another heart for him to hold
    He and that heart were to blame
    As lies were only told
    My heart has nothing to give
    As he wants my love back
    Now that I have no reason to live
    My heart turns coal black
    Years were thrown away
    Heavens awaits me soon
    Somewhere i could decay
    Really close to the blue moon
    As I fly through the sky
    I hope you rot with her heart
    I give my goodbye
    For God had mine from the start
                                 K_P
                                 

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    sevyn7 commented on Heartless

    01-27-2011

    You are very talented, and this poem shows how pure you are, the right one awaits your heart, and he will cherish you to the end of times, and beyond. God will guide you if he has not already. Excellent write. Dave
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    yes God is slowly guiding me to happiness :) thank you

    EdSchmeltzer commented on Heartless

    09-23-2010

    You poured alot into this one too. I hope you keep this up and have plenty more to share with us. And I hope being able to convey things through writing is as therapeutic for you as it is for many others. Regardless of what people think of you, your thoughts and feelings HERE are greatly appreciated.
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    thank you so much :)

    wiskeygirl5090 commented on Heartless

    09-02-2010

    I read both of your poems and I must say they gave me chills I hope that by you being able to write your feelings it helps cuz after reading this it would be a sad day in poetry if you were to leave this world........ KEEP WRITTING it helps great read
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    gallaxy commented on Heartless

    08-10-2010

    Very good write. Like me, i gave my all. My heart and soul. And when there was nothing left, they went on to the next. All of them, everytime..........thats how life is unfortunetly............
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    Qualin commented on Heartless

    08-08-2010

    I just dont understand why some of you beautiful girls get so wrapped up on some lieing guy that isnt worth writing about...youth is wasted on the young ..how well I know you have a talent you are lovely, the right one will come along and the memories will fade untill you actually say to yourself..what did I see in that thing in the first place!!! You keep on with your talent I'm sure there are more your a good poetress...Qualin
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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