Dieing Snow

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  • Death
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  • Dark Poetry
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  • Loss

    Dieing Snow

     Gently, gently dragging me
    Quietly as he could be
    Pure white snow is falling down
    Gently drifting to the ground
    Soundly sleeping beneath this tree
    Under cold red snow ill be
    Hoping someday to be found
    Sleeping on this cold hard ground
                          
                                   K_P

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    angelchaser commented on Dieing Snow

    02-11-2011

    In a very short poem, you've made death seem so beautiful. Wonderful poem, my friend.
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    killingP13

    02/11/2011

    thank you i have a passion for sad poems and yours are just amazing :) hopefully ill be able to write such inspiring poems like yourself

    sevyn7 commented on Dieing Snow

    01-27-2011

    How sad, but beautifuly writen this poem is. I love dark writes, and this is short, but full of darkness, me like it alot. I bow to your talent. Dave
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    killingP13

    02/03/2011

    why thank you very much it means alot coming from someone as talented as yourself

    Teardrops commented on Dieing Snow

    01-21-2011

    to wirte like this is to be alive and full of talent . Write me a poem of love Marie
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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