Substance

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    Substance

    I’ve kissed the ground, I’ve touched the sky,
    But I don’t need substance to fly me that high.
    The world stops spinning as I start to fall
    But soon I feel nothing at all.
    I’ve felt the high, I’ve cried the pain.
    Where is the balance between sunshine and rain?

    Substance to think, substance to feel,
    But is there a substance for me that will heal?
    For when I fly high or dip dangerously low,
    The gray takes over.
    Then where do I go?

    I’ve built me a castle, three walls at the most.
    My escape plans provoke the deepening moat.
    All that’s left for me is static.

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    monkyntz commented on Substance

    05-03-2009

    i'm still searching for that substance. i can relate. keep searching

    federallawman commented on Substance

    04-27-2009

    The harder we fall, the easier it becomes to get back up. the old adage is one step forward two steps back. Reality is one step back two steps forward. Good work.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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