Spacer

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    Easily Distracted

    Overwhelemed by the Attractive

    Dazed with everything he could interact with.

    So Free..and disingaged with his concience

    So Breathless...He has nothing to stress with.

    Blank is his mind, Narcisist is his indulgence

    Running Free, When in Reality he's Stiff.

    Nothing like his own enjoyed Bliss.

    Spacing out...is something he hopes to never miss

    Poor Spacer, he's not able to be secured

    From Reality and Fantasy.

    As the consequences regardless are indured

    Because this transition of ecstacsy

    Has the Satisfaction, He's prefered.

    As everything and everyone is forgotten when Refered

    Easily Distarcted overwhelemed by the attractive.

    Poor Spacer, This euphoria strips him from Acomplishment.

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    lsharp commented on Spacer

    11-14-2009

    for a young man--you have some extremely good poetic skill----keep it up---i dont know if you are into the "rapping" at all---you could be the next "NAS".
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    NyquanaLaura commented on Spacer

    02-16-2009

    Thanks for keeping me intrigued...Kudos Nyia
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    graceladymn commented on Spacer

    02-15-2009

    It is in that space that the visionary rises. Embrace it.
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    Niecy commented on Spacer

    02-06-2009

    Wow, what a state of Wonder? Beautifully written, read several of you poems, you write with such a deep perception!
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    Paradice21 commented on Spacer

    01-31-2009

    Alright spacer some interesting points you made but good poem. You are still young and When you have an Ideal of what you are you can grow into the person u want to B!
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