I Miss You

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  • Lost Love

    I Miss You
    How are you?

    I cannot be Complete here Tonight

    You can't See, Im losing The fight

    I'm Dying Despite my try's

    To stop Dreaming of you every Night

    I see you, I breath You wherever

    But your unaware

    And I doubt you care

    That Your Complexion haunts

    Distrauts me

    From doing anything at all

    I Miss YOU

    Gracefully I'm losing The best part's of me

    Maybe it was meant to be....maybe

    It's Distiny

    I can't see why, I cannot cry

    But I'm feeling a severe pain in My life

    And I don't even try

    To be happy Tonight...

    As I refuse to lose that pain, that once was right

    Because Then they'd all be right

    And All you did was fuck up my life...

    I refuse to accept that lie

    Because that pain is what kept me alive

    I Miss You



    Written By: Manuel Martinez
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    shelly53 commented on I Miss You

    10-23-2009

    this is great-------your thoughts flow very smoothly and precise---keep up the good work
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    cliftondurant commented on I Miss You

    08-26-2009

    yes tis is a wonderful poem of love love can have a great affect on you good job
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    litldeer commented on I Miss You

    02-23-2009

    This was so heartfelt. I feel you so much in this. Great job!
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    lynesha3000 commented on I Miss You

    01-31-2009

    i think that by far this poem here is amazing on a NO BUllSHit side it leaves me feeling as though i have competition FINALLY i mean its not a bad thing at all i just love the way you place your words with eachother and yu show true emotions
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    drewking commented on I Miss You

    01-13-2009

    awesome poem, beautiful expression.
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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