I'd Crawl Through Hell

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    I'd Crawl Through Hell

    I Tried to swim into the depth whithin.

    Reach the shallow ocean you sink in.

    I tried to be fiercefully strong.

    I tried to carry all of your heavy Fate Everlong.

    I Would Crawl through Hell, for You

    If it Meant that every Crawl was Meant for Two.

    I would fight to keep my Conciousness.

    If it meant You'd keep your Happiness.

    Then all my pain and Scars.

    Would shine more proudly than Stars.

    The only Waste in my endurance.

    Would be your confusion to my Insurance.

    For you control my goals,Smiles and Reason.

    Like Our Abrading Sun guides a Season.

    Your Invigorating Eyes shine brighter than any of the world's light's.

    All the stars in the universe could never replace how you shine my night's.

    I'd crawl through hell, for you

    If it meant every fall I took was for two.

    Because life without you is life without Air.

    And now that I have your breath I live without dispair.

    You've supplied a life of meaning and inifinte Hope.

    So there is no loss that with you I could not simply Cope.



    Written by: Manuel Martinez
    Copyright 2009 All Rights Reserved

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    mdpoetgirl commented on I'd Crawl Through Hell

    08-17-2012

    Powerful, emotional piece. Your heart is showing, loved it!
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    refinedgold17 commented on I'd Crawl Through Hell

    10-05-2009

    This is my life!!! No wonder I did not deny your friend request. This is the kind of heart that people are missing and if they could retreive such a heart from the depths of darkness and restore it within them, the world would be a better place.
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    drewking commented on I'd Crawl Through Hell

    01-13-2009

    very deep expression of love.. awesome.. very well written..
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    meip commented on I'd Crawl Through Hell

    01-11-2009

    Beautiful
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    Paradice21 commented on I'd Crawl Through Hell

    01-07-2009

    Sorry for misspells. I hate when that happens because it’s a big pet peeve of mine but every now and then I slip up!
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