Sonnet 4 ~ Water

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    To the one whom this is written for: You are the water that quenches my land. Though, we are far apart, and your lands are naught but this water, with nothing to soak or dry out the water, soon I will be your sun, to dry up all the rain.

    Sonnet 4 ~ Water

     To view you as though a river flowing

    A tinkling creek singing its pure call

    So true, it cleanses all impurities

    Oh those who bathe in its watery falls

    But so much more, you are the lands around

    Quenching the thirst of a drought too long felt

    You are the rain that soaked the dried out grounds

    Relieving the cough from a weary soul’s throat

    It seem to over flow, drowning the place

    Too long away, there is naught but water

    Time trying to fade out your loving grace

    Despite how we long to be together

    But, Time shall never pull quite hard enough

    For through all of this, we are still in love

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Sonnet 4 ~ Water

    12-08-2010

    Very well ordered words... i love the feeling that it gives off.
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