SILHOUETTES OF YOUR LOVE

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    SILHOUETTES OF YOUR LOVE
    SILHOUETTES OF YOUR LOVE


    Silhouettes of your love

    Still dance upon my
    face

    As the moon covers
    the sun, an eclipsical
    erase

    A moment of eternal
    darkness,

    Enlightening as it's bleak

    Foreshadowing of doom

    Is the aura of mystique

    Adorn the paper lace veil,

    From a patterned hole

    A tiny being escapes

    Searching for a soul


    Alison © 1985

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    TREVON commented on SILHOUETTES OF YOUR LOVE

    05-22-2009

    I COULD FEEL YOUR LOSS PASSSION FOR THE MOON IN THE BEGINNING OF THE POEM. tHEN IT FEELS AS THOUGH WHAT HAS BEEN LOSS IS YOU. yOU TRY TO HIDE, BUT HOW CAN HIDE FROM OURSELVES EVEN THOUGH WE WANT TO! I LIKE IT. TREVON
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    Hoosierpoet commented on SILHOUETTES OF YOUR LOVE

    05-05-2009

    Kind of what I am feeling right now. All that is left is the silhouette, the memory, the heart ache. Moses
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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