HOW FAR WILL HE LET ME GO

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    HOW FAR WILL HE LET ME GO
    HOW FAR WILL HE LET ME GO

    How far will he let me go

    How soon will he let me know

    If I really was the one

    Was it only just for fun

    Did he take pleasure in my torment

    Was it just for the moment

    How would I know

    How could I bestow

    All of my charm all of my charms

    On a snake charmers psalms

    Spinning and turning like a child’s top

    Letting go was so easy I didn’t want to stop

    Still it was a joy I will not regret

    I will stay within his debt

    Showing me beauty and holding me tight

    Being my mirror and giving me sight

    Alison Buzzotta © The Rebirth Years 2005










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    california commented on HOW FAR WILL HE LET ME GO

    08-16-2009

    very nice, short, simple and beautiful. i enjoyed this a lot.....
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    ELRey commented on HOW FAR WILL HE LET ME GO

    04-30-2009

    Like your imagry. esp "Showing me beauty and holding me tight... Being my mirror and giving me sight" Nice
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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