"When The Funk Hit The Fans"
It was a beautiful day in spring, just right for an outdoor party fling The Band had set up on stage, rumor has it tey were the hotttest rage They played a funky groove, from a wild errotic tune just then is when the Funk Hit The Fans, They started jammin and rockin in the stands, so when the Funk Hit The Fans, They were screaming, singing and clapping with the Band It was like a hypnotic tranz took over the the crowd,like a snow covered cloud, not a moment they were bored, they had never such excitement before,They played a funky groove from a wild errotic tune just then is when the Funk Hit The Fans, They started jammin and rockin in the stands, so when the Funk Hit The Fans, They were screaming,singing and clapping with the Band the band really rocked the house, and left the crowd so aroused they can't forget that day, hoping for so many more to come their way Golden Pagoda Productions and Greg Wong@ copyright 2008"When The Funk Hit The Fans"
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FranzJ commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"
12-04-2009
- you must like music and/or play - music is my favorite too - nice groove
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12/07/2009
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lindabrito commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"
10-01-2009
- You must be a great song writer, because I feel the music every time I read one of your poems. Linda
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10/02/2009
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RebeccaKempf33 commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"
09-25-2009
- This is like being at one of those live poetry meetings in a club....snaps fingers lmao!
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09/27/2009
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ListninEar commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"
09-15-2009
- Oh, if you haven't already (which I find hard to beleive) you are definetly gonna get discovered! This stuff needs to be made famous. Your writing just seems to connect us all!
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09/16/2009
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danmartyjake1 commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"
09-13-2009
- I like the sound in this. I hear the music when I read it.
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