" Try Me"(Babe)
I know your heart was badly broken and it's on the mend Yes, I'm gonna win your trust and be your very.very bestn friend I'll never leave your love dangling and your emotions on the deep bitter end Try me, Babe, Try me, Babe I know how awful your pain can be to have a shatterd broken Dream. an optical illusion of love about passionate things.I know just what you feel, Try me, Babe, Try me Babe Copyright@G.W. aka Wildpendigus 2009" Try Me"(Babe)
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FreeBird02 commented on " Try Me"(Babe)
03-28-2010
- Very note worthy feelings of passion! Keep up the good work. FreeBird 02
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Mareann commented on " Try Me"(Babe)
03-16-2010
- Wonderful writing... very enjoyable poem, This gets a 10 in my book, thanks for sharing! Mary
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Paradice21 commented on " Try Me"(Babe)
11-30-2009
- This is A Nice piece... Love the message within it!
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12/16/2009
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krisann commented on " Try Me"(Babe)
10-18-2009
- THIS IS A GREAT POEM....EXPRESS WHAT U FEEL..TOTALLY AWSOME......:o)
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10/18/2009
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Melissa commented on " Try Me"(Babe)
10-18-2009
- i love it! it would make an amazing song, that's for sure
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10/18/2009
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