" Back Trackin"

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    " Back Trackin"

     I'm Back Trackin                                                                             Gotta Find what my love was lackin                                                     I'm Back Trackin                                                                             To find the weak linkwhere my love was slackin                                   We were the perfect lovers                                                                The model couple admired and adored by so many others                   We had the passion and deep respect that the world has long dreamed of                                                                                                  we never has to worry about quarrels and fights because our heart were so full of love                                                                                 I'm Back Trackin                                                                            Gotta Find what my love was lackin
    I'm Back Trackin
    To find the weak link where my love was slackin
    Then came a sudden change
    Like a sunny day when you're caught in the rain
    The building blocks within our hearts
    Were broken and jolted apart
    I'm Back Trackin
    Gotta Find what my love was lackin
    I'm Back Trackin
    To find the weak link where my love was slackin
    We did all we could to place the pieces back together
    I was harder the more we tried
    Maybe it was our fate I just can't figure out why?
    I'm Back Trackin
    Gotta Find what my love was lackin
    I'm Back Trackin
    To find the weak link where my love was slackin                      
    Golden Pagoda Productions
    Greg Wong@ copyright 2009

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    Paradice21 commented on " Back Trackin"

    12-07-2009

    I Like the way it rolled on and on...Nicely written indeed!!
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    wildpendigus

    12/16/2009

    Thanks for your nice comments! WP

    ANNAMAE commented on " Back Trackin"

    10-16-2009

    I like the "Back Trackin" lyrics of this poem very much. I can see this poem in a western song. A lot of people back track their lost loves hoping to find where things went wrong. When the right two hearts meet, the right two will be forever. Nice words, Annamae
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    wildpendigus

    10/18/2009

    It could be, but I recorded it as R&B! WP

    PamelaALamppa commented on " Back Trackin"

    10-09-2009

    Wow. these are very good lyrics. I think you have something here. Would love to hear this to music. ~Pamela
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    mercedes1 commented on " Back Trackin"

    10-09-2009

    I like this, we spend time back-tracking, but never find that elusive spot where the roads parted. I like the flow of your poem, lyrical, would love to hear it sung!
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    JCKasper commented on " Back Trackin"

    10-03-2009

    You certainly have a unique lyrical style and format ....... It's very interesting and entertaining! Not exactly the same as Don Ho ..... lol I used to live on the island of Oahu, many moons ago! I'll always remember that song - Sukiyaki? I know they altered the translation - but it's always been one of my sentimental favorites
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    wildpendigus

    10/04/2009

    I know, thanks for the nice comments!WP

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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