"Our love brought me down"
Sometimes it praises your wishes, sometimes it lingers and glistens, love is tricky yet you can't mistreat it. When I met you I was in a trance, blinded by such beauty. At times it gets rough with all the stuff that challenges our relationship, but we strive on together. Sometimes I feel like i'm not good enough to give you the small things in the world that most havunwind e no problem getting. It maddens me when others try to smother our relationship and come in between our power we have together, we call it love. We can't pass the test individua;;y, we must work together as a team to redeem our broken love that has brought me down. You are like a strawberry bliss, sweet and full of beauty to gaze at as we walk hand in hand like married duets we will through this. Our love is bonded together by warm kisses tight hugs and two beautiful kids I love with all of my insides as we unwind together as a family in paradise. Our love has brought me down but I refuse to go down without a fight for our love with my dove, that is you."Our love brought me down"
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mskatrina7 commented on "Our love brought me down"
01-02-2011
- Aw that was sweet. good poem. i like this one too.
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bose commented on "Our love brought me down"
01-05-2010
- nice one guy.did this really happen to?if yes, then i wish u and ur beautiful girl the best as from now on.May the joy and peace of thelord, fill ur relationship.take good care.i will love to hear from u. read my poem too(it is titled the significant u). u can leave ur comments on my profile too.
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01/05/2010
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kpeery09 commented on "Our love brought me down"
12-09-2009
- I like this, it reminds me of what me and my girlfriend have now, for yes I had a broken love and I thought i would never love again but then my own girlfriend lifted me up and gave me the meaning of true love. I rate this 10
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lucindaclaire commented on "Our love brought me down"
12-02-2009
- Hi, I found this well written and painful to read which means you did a wonderful job. Hats off to you, my dear.
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12/02/2009
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stever commented on "Our love brought me down"
12-02-2009
- great love poem..or even song...i also hate it when other people think they know how your love should go....
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12/02/2009
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