"Brightest and Bluest"

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a dedication to Jeanieblue - a friend of Phoenix9 and a member of this site. She is suffering with cancer and, as of 24 August 2009, may have only weeks left here with us. Although I've not personally known her, it's pretty clear that she's an angelic soul. And may the Holy Father bless her and keep her.
    ~Stardrift

    "Brightest and Bluest"

    The eternity of the Lord's lands shine
    And shine of violet sparks ever bright
    In all dimensions, all facets divine
    We are pulsars, lighthouses in the night.

    The lucidity of the mind is vast
    And so far between awake and alive
    Seven million planets exist and last
    We play in the rifts of the solar drive.

    The infinity of Heaven is home
    The dream of life is only a light year
    On Earth in tears we must for a time roam
    Farewell, and know, you were truly loved here.




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    ArgusWayne commented on "Brightest and Bluest"

    11-30-2009

    This is very touching and well-written. It almost reads like a passage from a bible, perhaps from a lost scroll. Very good.
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    SavVySam commented on "Brightest and Bluest"

    11-11-2009

    A peaceful and tender gift of loving faith. Beautiful wish for a friend.
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    mamasan commented on "Brightest and Bluest"

    11-04-2009

    I just read this read and my sadness spilled over for this young lady that is going home soon. May her last days be full of joy and bliss knowing her friends are supportive of her. Yes, life is only a light year away................. I am sure she will come back as an angel and impart true joy and bliss from above. So the next time you look towards the heavens and the stars are out in their full glory.....just take a look and wink at the angel that surely is JeannieBlue...........
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    stellar commented on "Brightest and Bluest"

    10-06-2009

    very wide and deep understanding of life and the universe...all your poems seemed a revelation
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    Stardrift

    10/06/2009

    Thankyou Stell! For you to say that indicates that you are a very discerning and heartful soul! Ty.

    angel3337 commented on "Brightest and Bluest"

    09-10-2009

    I can so relate to the write you capture the very essence of HIS Vastness, and HIS crative power~ Divine work
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    Stardrift

    09/10/2009

    Ah ha, I can see that you really liked this one! Don't forget to check out Jeanieblue's profile! Glad you enjoyed it. Ty!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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