Paradise

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Paradise



I long to touch Heaven
beyond the moon and sun
Each silky cloud
transforms the planets
into delicious rain
Shower dreams upon us
bring us closer to that place
where Love and Grace
are strength

~vrj
3-18-2010

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cliftondurant commented on Paradise

08-25-2010

a beautiful poem we all want to be in paradise i love it

Rhymer commented on Paradise

08-25-2010

Heaven awaits, I like the message and the poem, another unique and interesting write.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

latinangel’s Poems (7)

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