Can I buy you a drink?
I pour my thoughts
on a blank page
I watch the words
spill across the surface
as they attempt to absorb
your undivided attention
just a tiny drink
of my soul
~vrj
3-29-2010
Can I buy you a drink?
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Tags: Life
I pour my thoughts
on a blank page
I watch the words
spill across the surface
as they attempt to absorb
your undivided attention
just a tiny drink
of my soul
~vrj
3-29-2010
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NitaBoo commented on Can I buy you a drink?
08-27-2010
- This is dougie...(fresh)................................
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Rhymer commented on Can I buy you a drink?
08-25-2010
- You have my attention, interesting write. 10 from me...................
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