Paczki vs Donut

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    Paczki vs Donut

     Round One began with a bell,
    And then the donut fell.

    It was a scarey thing to see,
    but they managed to revive dear donut,
    and managed to put his filling back in.

    The filling was synthetic,
    full of despair,
    and hardly there.

    The Paczki took but one hit,
    and effective hit that showed his inner side.

    It took a long time to put that jelly back in.
    You'd think his filling came in a tin,
    but alas it was real fruit filling.

    The Paczki had more filling than the donut.

    Move over Evander Holyfield.

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    LenaM commented on Paczki vs Donut

    11-29-2010

    I love this , You had me almost rolling out of my chair with laughter and there is NO comparison between the 2 . Actually it was my former son in law who introduced me to Paczki . He made them once a year oh but I looked forward to them so much
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    papapaczki

    12/02/2010

    I am glad you enjoyed it!

    LenaM

    12/02/2010

    Long live Paczki oh man now I want one lol

    cousinsoren commented on Paczki vs Donut

    12-24-2009

    COUSINSOREN'S COMMENT EDITTED I am fatally confused as to what a Paczki really is. Not having come in contact with this much adulated pastry, I used to think it was a sort of doughnut . Now I have to re-educate.......lol. A doughnut has a hole in it (or orifices as Chaos mischievously suggests) What has a Paczki that makes it different from a doughnut?? Willl someone in the know enlighten me?? Despite my psysiognomical confusion, I cannot help but admire Papapackzi's superb mastery of the art of injecting humour into the most banal down-to -earth situation by the sheer power of imparting poetic beauty and appeal ( without resorting to much use of figurative gadgets) to the most trivial theme or object. The techniques of animation and personification are his special domain. He seems to be no mean raconteur.....................lol Whatever he says or sings possess his pecvuliar brand of fast tempo, energy and frivolity or humour. It may be premature , since I have not yet read enough of his creations to say it) to conclude that he never appears to be morose nor unhappy. Papapaczki's poetry seems to be always chuckling.
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    cousinsoren commented on Paczki vs Donut

    12-24-2009

    I am fatally confused as to waht a Packzi really is. Not having come into contact with this pastry, I used to think that it was a sort of doughnut. Now I have to re-educate........lol A doughnut has an orifice or orifices as Chaos mischievously suggests. What has Packzki has that makes it different from a doughnut? Despite my physiognomical confusion, I cannot help but admire Papapackzi's superb mastery of the art of injecting humour into the most banal dwon-to earth situation by the sheer power of imparting poetic beauty and appeal to the most trivial theme or object. The techniques of Animattion and personification in verse are his special domain.Whatever he says or sings possesses his peculiar brand of fast tempo, lot of energy and wry humour. It may be premature,since I have not yet enough of his creations to say it, but he never appears to be morose or unhappy. His poetry seems to be always chuckling......lol
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    Chaos128 commented on Paczki vs Donut

    12-23-2009

    Donuts (as evidenced by their... ah... orifices) are clearly of the feminine gender, and deserve better than the shabby treatment here displayed.
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    Hiporlacking

    12/23/2009

    Haha

    papapaczki

    12/23/2009

    I can't apologize for the donut. She agreed to the fight.

    mamasan commented on Paczki vs Donut

    11-03-2009

    I just can't stop laughing.....the visualization is great.....really tickles my ribs even the one I cracked a couple of weeks ago. Tonight is election night here and I would have voted if they had some one like you............you are a real trouper..........
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    papapaczki

    11/04/2009

    Why thank you! Its good to know that my political career is a success before it has begun!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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