I Love You

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  • Food

    Poem Commentary

    True love is often hard to find.  Yet if you look at the things closest to you, it is easier to find.

    I Love You

    I love your mouth,
    and the way it tastes when I put my lips against your lips.

    I love your body,
    how it is so perfect when I touch it.

    I love your beauty,
    the way I melt inside just looking at you.

    I love what you do to my spirit,
    when I look upon you.

    I love the way you taste,
    when I put you inside my mouth.

    Dear Paczki,
    You are the aroma of my mouth.

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    Worthless commented on I Love You

    10-21-2010

    I try to stay away from Paczki's or any donut's for that matter since i am a women and we're known to store everything we eat even if it's healthy. But now your making me hungry for one.. Love your work.
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    papapaczki

    10/27/2010

    Paczkis are killer when it comes to calories and fat. Its always good to avoid them. Thanks for the kind words :)

    stefy commented on I Love You

    10-08-2010

    That is wonderful and tasty.......................passion for food....or something else.....really i like it:-)
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    clips401 commented on I Love You

    01-27-2010

    yummy!
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    SavVySam commented on I Love You

    01-15-2010

    The taste of sweet perfection swirls in your love poem to a Paczki confection! ~10
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    papapaczki

    01/15/2010

    Thank you for the read :)

    CatsMeow commented on I Love You

    01-03-2010

    [I put my lips against your lips}. It probably would sound best to write “I put my lips to you. Nice poem never the less. I love the way you have expressed your emotions while eating this fine pastry.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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