Outstanding Strength
Be outstanding because beneath the skin is a body and beneath the body is a soul. The soul cannot be reached, unless touched by someone special. No one wants to be with a love who is just like everyone else. You do not pay attention to those people. You want to be able to say I would die for him in heartbeats moments. You shall not give up because that is what people are expecting and if you don't give up then that is what makes you strong. Don't fall apart when people expect you to the most. Stay Strong!Outstanding Strength
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- writingislove
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cmlestrade commented on Outstanding Strength
01-03-2010
- This was very good prose and very profound advice. I live the line " The soul cannot be reached, unless touched by someone special. that is what made me love this piece.
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01/22/2010
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NLott commented on Outstanding Strength
10-15-2009
- I can really feel what you're sayin' here.....I wish i was this fluent....
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10/15/2009
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Hampton commented on Outstanding Strength
10-01-2009
- This is very good advice delivered in a conversational style that is more prose than poetry but very nice all the same
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10/02/2009
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