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He has forgiven me, time and time again. He has helped me let go, of all the bad that is in my past. He has helped me stop, what I thought could never end. He has forgiven me, for all my sins. He is all I now have, to get me through this nightmare called life. He is, God, Love, Hate, Pain, Fear. He is everything.He
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- writingislove
- Sleep is for those who deserve it.
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08-27-2009
- I absolutely disagree with commenter dahlusion. He is in a delusion. "He" is Jesus. He, said "I am the way the truth and the life...learn of Me. That means we have a path to follow...in the bible. Please do not follow what people tell you only, back it up with study from the bible. Did you know that He loves you so much! Just remember to say His name when you call Him. Good job on expressing yourself with this prose. But learn about Jesus...He is worth it.
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08/27/2009
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cmlestrade commented on He
08-01-2009
- This is perfect. For one so young you have a great insight into the spiritual nature of things. I am proud of this poem and I am proud of you.
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08/02/2009
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07-07-2009
- You are "the everything" here in this poem that you speak of. You are the god, love, fear and joy, the perfect human being.
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07/08/2009
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