GoodBye

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    GoodBye

    My heart is pained for what I had to say.
    My life is dull for leaving you stranded.
    My body is weak for saying Im so sorry.
    My mind is dead for being so lonely.
    I said Im sorry, and you said forget it.
    I said come back, and you said Im done.
    I said just kill me, you said fine.
    I heard the gun shot, but I said Im still living.
    What has happened?
    What is going on here?
    Come back to me, Im sorry for paining you.
    Just please don't leave me stranded here alone.
    I was struck by bad luck, what can I say?
    Nothing more, to take a leave.
    I say GoodBye and then, depart.
    GoodBye to pain and hurting you.
    GoodBye for my sins of lifeless hope.
    GoodBye.

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    laydbak1 commented on GoodBye

    08-03-2009

    I say, goodbye... and, mean it... It's just what it says, while insinuating the possible option of meeting again sometime and parting on a good note... And, while there's no such word as badbye, there are several choice alternatives to make up for it, along with at least one, idealic hand signal to use... in case they're hard of hearing... lol..... A very sensitive and good write here....
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    writingislove

    08/04/2009

    Thank you very much. I must agree that there is no word of badbye, there are bad byes. Its just a matter of saying goodbye badly.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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