Nonsense in a Wheel Barrow

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    Nonsense in a Wheel Barrow
    I fell into this dark abandonment
    It’s so cold when you’re alone
    My extremities are falling off
    Since I won’t be needing them anymore
    I’m sore and mislead by a figure with a wheel barrow
    So I decided to hop in and now I don’t know where I am
    Or even who I am
    So I guess I’m just another torso in a wheel barrow
    Rolling through corridors and saying nothing
    Just staring into space
    Hoping for another lifetime when things can go my way

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    Crush commented on Nonsense in a Wheel Barrow

    09-19-2009

    insane. insane in execution. this is remarkable and it messes with my head.bravo, allegra. 10 from me.
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    origionalmerlin commented on Nonsense in a Wheel Barrow

    04-08-2009

    feeling like a fieldmouse dancing in a slaughterhouse well done... read rated all of yours, write more, or if you please do same with my collection..thank you (bows to the poet)
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    timeoutofmind commented on Nonsense in a Wheel Barrow

    11-24-2008

    a torso in a wheel barrow is an interesting visual
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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