Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

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    Get the Fuck out of my Head Please
    You’re fucking me up bad baby
    And I’m coming apart slowly
    Got me crying when I thought I was happy
    And sad when I smile
    You make every good feeling seem forced
    Like I’m using it to block the thought of you
    My eyes are burning
    And my heart is turning cold
    I’m young and should be having fun
    But lately I’ve been feeling old
    Memories of you defeat me
    Especially when I’m alone
    It hurts me just to talk to you
    When you call me on the phone
    There’s a lasting fear of losing you
    I’ve had it all along
    Loving you used to feel right
    Now I’m trying to make it seem wrong
    I need to save myself
    Express what I feel
    Learn to deal
    Get some help

    My heart beats so I can live
    It beats for nobody else
    Been trying to find somebody
    Now I need to find myself
    I used to be okay
    But you came in
    And took it all away
    I can’t look at you
    Can’t even think of you
    Without regret and getting upset

    These tears aren’t for you
    They’re just from you

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    Worthless commented on Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

    05-21-2010

    I like it.. My version is so much more negative and dark with anger of pain so sharp... I was thinking of going out with this asshole who fed me lies and what not and long story short i had dreams of him fucking some whore he claimed he didn't but God told me otherwise and I could see straight thru his thin disquise with all his unbeleivable lies.... Nice...
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    StandingBear commented on Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

    08-27-2009

    Fuk yeh, a stand-up straight shooting work you've created. Gotta love one's self first in order to know how to love another. Great write A. SBear
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    Worthless

    05/21/2010

    No you don't! i hate myself but I have all the love in the world to give to others. Everyone else comes first in my eyes, even strangers which is probably why my life always gets worse....

    phatdaddee commented on Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

    05-13-2009

    Remember, poetry is meant to be personal, so as long as you have done whatever it is that you do then you consider it done perfectly! Loved it! Disregard first comment,typos!
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    phatdaddee commented on Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

    05-13-2009

    Remember, poetry is meant to be personal, so as long as you have done what is that you do then you consider it done perfectly! Loved it!
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    origionalmerlin commented on Get the Fuck out of my Head Please

    04-08-2009

    good frestyle rant, lol it stands on its own merits as such word choice and writing style do it all. through and through what a poem does it does.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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