Moving On

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    It seems some of the best writing I do comes to me while I am at work... :)

    Moving On

    Fool me once or fool me twice-
    I should have followed my advice.
    You took me down and broke my heart.
    I was the fool who played the part.
    I caught you with another girl;
    Heard some excuse that made me hurl.
    "It's not my fault," I heard you say,
    But that's no matter anyway.
    She cheated on you as you did to me.
    Now you want me back, but I don't believe.
    Crawl across the floor on you hands and knees,
    Saying anything and begging please.
    I'm not dumb and I'm not blind.
    I've got someone better to find.
    Someone's whose feelings of love are true.
    Someone who's more of a man than you.

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    dragongarcia commented on Moving On

    09-04-2019

    Been there done that. Excellent poem keep it up. Can't wait to see what else you will write

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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