Lost love

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    This is one of the first poems I ever wrote, I think I was 13 at the time. Not one of my best but it is still one of my favorites and the message is as true to day as it was then, lost love never dies...

    Lost love

     Love is sweet,
    Love is sorrow,
    My heart is chilled until tomorrow.

    The autumn winds blow into the night,
    Fright of her bring cries to the sight.

    Love of the future,
    Love of the past,
    No one compares to the love of the last.

    What's lost is lost,
    What's future is present,
    I think of her at the light of the crescent.

    To sing a song would not be perfection,
    For my lost love not finding a new direction    .

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    knight4696 commented on Lost love

    08-30-2010

    Angel .. even at 13 you had so much insight. The emotion in this is tangible ... I didn't start writing until I was about 16 ... but my first writes could never compare to this ... Great job! :) Ken
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    angel33614

    08/30/2010

    Oldie but goodie, lol. I was a pretty deep teenager and this was written before I was even a teenager, lol. I grew up at a very young age, so I was very mature for my age. Thanks so much for commenting with such kind words of encouragement! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

    ShadowStealer commented on Lost love

    08-10-2010

    Definitely a poem filled with emotion. Nice one angel!!! ShadowStealer
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    angel33614

    08/10/2010

    This is one of my really old ones, I think I wrote it when I was 12 or 13, after my first real girlfriend broke up with me, sweet puppy love and first heart break, good old times, lol. Thank you so much for the review! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

    charmlessman2d commented on Lost love

    08-10-2010

    flows so freely. but stings so deep. i like the simple nature the words play. but i love the force implied behind the simplistic words. this hits home. especially right now that i'm alone. thanks for writing this and sharing it with me.
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    angel33614

    08/10/2010

    A very old but short and sweet poem, filled with a lot of emotion and agnst. I wrote this after my very first girlfriend broke up with me, around the age of 12-13. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! with grace and humility ANGEL

    cheronld commented on Lost love

    07-13-2010

    Cute poem....the heart wants what the heart wants....nice....Cher
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    angel33614

    07/25/2010

    Thank you so much for your comments and review as they are always welcomed and appreciated! Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel

    SavVySam commented on Lost love

    05-09-2010

    Yes yes...During that time of new awakenings and change young hearts do so much growing, learning the hearts true capacity for love and the meaning of unconditional!
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    angel33614

    05/12/2010

    What a beautiful sentiment! Very, very true indeed... I know this poem is short and sweet but it still holds alot of emotion and memories for me, it is vey special as she was a very special soul, she was my first love... Thanks again, your friend Angel. Purity of the soul, journey well!!!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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