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  • Lost Love

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    i wrote this poem after a man i loved dearly with all my heart and soul went off to war to protect me and you, and he never came back after he said he would, and hed return to me so we could be together forever.....

    left behind

    When you left me here, on this lifeless planet, 
    I didn't know what to do, so i panicked.
    Now i'm over the panicking, and writing this poem,
    Hoping you'll hear it where ever you are.
    I just needed to tell you, i love you.
    And I'm sorry for not realizing this,
    and telling you everyday, before this tragic horror.
    Now i'll never see you until i die, so,
    I guess I'll see you then.
    I should've told you this ever since i met you,
    i love you.
    So this is how I've felt, ever since you left me behind.
    I miss you and love you,
    I'll see you soon.
    You were my heart and soul,
    I'm sorry for not realizing it,
    please forgive me,
    then maybe,
    just maybe,
    I won't feel Left Behind anymore.......

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    twilightchick’s Poems (31)

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