Dissapear
Falling, screaming, searching and waiting.
I'm looking for you but i don't find you.
I start to cry, but only to see you through blurred tears.
I blink to clear my sight,
but as easily you came, you've dissapeard,
once more again..
Dissapear
2 Comments
Tags: Lost Love
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08-23-2010
- falling,screaming,but I cant find...searching waiting..are you still mine..I've cried now only to see...me here waiting...will it always be...you came youve gone..like some magician,can you tell me where I stand..what is my position...(once more again is too blunt of an ending) the rythm and rhyme needs work..th subject and though are fine...your bud...Qualin...good choice of words
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redbloodink commented on Dissapear
08-22-2010
- This ment some thing way different to me then you probably wrote it as..... I see this in the way I see Jesus Chirst..... I know He is always there it's just I get caught up in my own tears and thoughts He becomes blurry to me.... ty for sharing and write on....... red
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