battle

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i wrote this when i thought my boyfriend was gonna break up with me, after all the things i went through to be able to acta]ually be with him,, i faughtt a fight and faught it welll....

battle

I'm fighting this fight,
trying to save us.
during this battle you fell overboard,
I'm throwing you a life preserver,
but you just wont grab it.
i reel it in again and toss it back out,
but you still dont grab it.
I'm starting to panic as i realize,
the truth is finally in existence.
we might not survive this fight,
or we probably were never meant to.
now your drifting farther and farther out to sea.
and i don't know if i can bring you back again,
i know i want to and i try..
but I'm no sailor, or superhuman,
not an angel, nor a demon.
i just happen to be human.
as i sit here with tears running down my face,
i whisper into the storm that this fight has brought,
the very last words from my mouth to your ears.
"goodbye my love..."

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twilightchick’s Poems (31)

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Star Performer 1
Guilt 1
Lights Flicker 2
Broken Drug 4
Lifeless 0
Dissapear 2
Almost Full 0
Stars 2
lifes Journey.. 0
Journey 0
battle 0
Faded Dream 1
mask 2
f*ck fairytales 3
i want 1
innocent 0
wasted hope 2
taylor's death 0
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i wish 0
mirror 0
Cried 0
rememeber 0
her death 0
somebody help me 1
life 1
left behind 0
sad 2
cigarrete 1
staying part2 1
running part1 1