Just Listen

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    Just Listen

    I need to have a talk with you
    There are some things I need to get off my chest
    So sit down and please just listen
    Although listening isn’t what you do best

    Please don’t interrupt with protests
    Just listen to my words; don’t try to explain
    Don’t categorize my feelings
    Just take note of the things that have caused my pain

    Search for all the deeper meanings
    Remember that I chose these words carefully
    And when I tell you how I feel
    Don’t tell me these feelings aren’t how they should be

    When I tell you of a problem
    Don’t solve it; I need to do that for myself
    And when I ask your opinion
    I don’t want an answer from off of a shelf

    I have asked that you just listen
    Not that you give advice or try to fix it
    So please listen and just hear me
    Genuinely listen; don’t be counterfeit

    When I have finished, you may talk
    By then you’ve earned a chance to speak your mind too
    Simply wait a moment for your turn
    Don’t talk or do; then I’ll do the same for you.

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    Grito commented on Just Listen

    04-10-2009

    The complex, intricate, caress of listening.

    Drivingczar commented on Just Listen

    04-08-2009

    Very nice potential! Good write!

    edgee commented on Just Listen

    04-07-2009

    i like this poem becuz its really trying to express your feeling and itds real becuz ppl dont really know how to listen....they need instructions so i hope things work out for you and dont worry about your scribble habit, things will come in due time, trust me....Ed Gee

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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