Is The Flame Dying?

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  • Love
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  • Fear
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  • Illusion
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  • Diying
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  • Feelings

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    Today, I said "I love you so much" and you said "I love you too" But not once did you say "I love you" for yourself... I still love you just the same... Is it dying for you, though???

    Is The Flame Dying?

     I don't know why,
    But things are not the same.
    Something is different...
    What?

    Do you still feel the same for me?
    Why do I get the sence that you don't?
    Baby, tell me
    Did I do something wrong?

    I don't want our love to fade,
    But the way you said "I love you" today
    It was not the same...
    What did I do?

    Maybe it's just me,
    Illusions come to me often...
    But whatever it is if there is anything,
    What did I do?

    Is the flame for me,
    within you, dying?
    My love for you so strong,
    Is yours for me ending?

    Tell me,
    Am I just imagining things
    Or is this real?
    Is the flame dying?

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    Ninjaboy commented on Is The Flame Dying?

    07-25-2011

    your just imagining things, i really wish you would stop worrying about these things, really, im not going anywhere, i still love you, as i have told you over a thousand times, i promise, it isnt dying
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