I hate you

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    I hate you

     I hate it when you talk to me about being with him
    I hate you when you smile with a smile so white and thin
    I hate you when you brag about finding the perfect guy
    I hate it when you laugh and smile when i can only cry
    I hate it when you say that you love me so much
    I hate this love i have for you like a neverending crush
    I hate it when you almost left me when we were dating high
    I hate it when you told me that you loved him more than me even though away from him i had helped you fly
    I hate you when you blamed me for the decision that you made
    I hate it when you refused to forgive me and blamed it on my confidence which swayed.
    I hate you because of how wonderful i thought you are
    I hate when you accepted that christmas gift and in return you made me feel so far
    I hate you when you make yourself sound so perfect and bright
    I hate the dreams i had when we were dating of me holding you tight
    I hate your personality so egotystical and greedy
    I hate you for not letting my heart fly freely
    I hate you for who you are and for what you did to me
    And yet for all that has happened above all i hate you for chosing him as you can clearly see






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    LadyLuck commented on I hate you

    03-14-2010

    My gawd such pain must be unbearable... and scarier more is that parts of this remind me of my x. some girls just dont realize how badly they can hurt a guy
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    Mandi commented on I hate you

    03-13-2010

    I feel your pain eminating from the neat in this poem. Knowing that you arae now engaged, you must have overcome this obstacle iin your life.
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    nonners commented on I hate you

    09-27-2009

    i liked this one as well im sure millions have been through exactly this,i love ya danny. smooches
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    KristyLoren commented on I hate you

    09-02-2009

    I always enjoy your art hun. I got such a vibe when reading, I could feel the anger and disgust, I LOVED it (SNAP) You have a wonderful way of imposing to your reader, I am a big fan of your work. You get my ten!!!
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    am2anangel commented on I hate you

    08-30-2009

    Once again your pain and passion are clearly stated in a poetic way. You have a talent for putting your feelings to paper. A few line seemed a bit forced, but over all very well done.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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