An Angel On my shoulder

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    An Angel On my shoulder

     You made me believe in something i thought better than i am. When i was insistent that i couldnt you constantly said i can
     You were always there for me to help me out in life. You were always the one that held all of the dreams and my strife
     You are so wonderful i just wanted you to know that every time that we speak the best of you will show You have this eternal glow to you that always seems to shine. It must be the way that you are so beautiful and so kindAs we are together i sometimes imagine us sitting hand in hand Then suddenly i wake up and realize that all i can do is to cry and stand
     You are a dream come true and everyone and i tell everyone i know well I think what is best about you is that you really are sw I just wrote this poem to remind you how much you truly mean to me. What my heart says about you only the both of us can see

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    dumplin commented on An Angel On my shoulder

    04-21-2010

    Wow, there's a lot of run on sentences here. It was difficult to decipher, but once I did, I was very touched by it. Good job!
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    am2anangel commented on An Angel On my shoulder

    09-05-2009

    Dan, very sweet and touching tribute to your friend. So when you get down on yourself remember the words you wrote in this poem and think how disappointed they would be to know you are down. I loved this piece. You are a great writer 10 from me. Keep it up.
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