HURRY LOVE

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    HURRY LOVE
    I'M ALWAYS IN A RUSH, I MEET SOMEONE NEW THEN I CRUSH.
    PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE, WAIT TOO LONG NOTHING IS TRUE.
    I GET TIRED OF WAITING FOR WHATEVER,
    I LIKE IT RIGHT THEN AND CLEVER.
    SOME MAY BE SATISFIED WITH THE GAME,
    BUT FOR ME IT'S ALWAYS THE SAME.
    LOOKING OVER LEFTOVER CRUMBS AND THE PLAYING DUMB.
    I'M HAPPY TO GET ANYTHING
    DON'T MATTER WHAT JUSTICE BRINGS.
    I SAY HURRY UP I WANT FIRST CUT.
    WHY SHOULD I SETTLE WHEN
    I HAVEN'T HAD IT FULL OR EVEN HALF, I REALLY MISS MY BATH.

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    swashington commented on HURRY LOVE

    08-18-2009

    Good stuff once again. And remember you don't have to settle, you should get first cut stay strong and it will come to you.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    08/19/2009

    I AM WRITING A BOOK CALLED DOPESON RIGHT NOW AND IT IS WRITTEN IN THE TRADITION OF DONALD GOINES. FIRST CUT MEANS FREESTYLE, UNEDITTED.

    prophesy commented on HURRY LOVE

    03-02-2009

    i feel you. / its coming dont wait./ the poet
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    07/03/2009

    PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE BUT WAIT TOO LONG NOTHING IS TRUE.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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