ADMISSION

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    THIS POEM IS ACTUALLY A SPELL TO WARD OFF EVIL.  DON'T WORRY NOW YOU MUST LEARN MY LEVEL.

    ADMISSION

    SEASONS CHANGE AND MUSCLES FLEX
    EVERYONE TRYING TO DO THEIR BEST.
    I SAY STOP PUTTING TO THE TEST!
    ONE HUGE CHANCE TO MARK MY WAY,
    I DIDN'T FORGET ABOUT JUDGEMENT DAY!
    JUDGEMENT DAY IS THAT FOR REAL?
    WHAT ABOUT THE MEALS?
    THERE WERE MANY I DIDN'T GET
    AND I REFUSE TO HEAR THE REST.
    THIS WHOLE THING I DON'T COMPREHEND
    IS DEATH MY ONLY FRIEND?
    I WOULD LIKE TO DISCOVER MORE
    I'M TIRED OF BEING LEFT ON THE FLOOR.
    GIVE ME A CHANCE FOR PETE'S SAKE
    AND PLEASE LET ME SAMPLE THAT LAKE.
    THE LAKE OF DESIRE WHAT I WANT
    CAN I DREAM THE IMAGE THING?

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    swashington commented on ADMISSION

    08-08-2009

    Girl once again this is deep, keep up the good writing you have a lot to give.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    08/09/2009

    I GOT ALL MY ATTENTION TO GIVE.

    JUSTLETGO commented on ADMISSION

    07-26-2009

    I like the poem and thought the writing style was unique.
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    PRIESTESSMACK

    07/27/2009

    THIS WAS A POEM I WROTE WHEN EVERYONE WAS AGAINST ME. SO I CALLED IT A PROTECTION SPELL.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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