Gone

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    Gone

     He's out of her life it hurt at first but now she is alright, she decided to not listen to his lies anymore it's over it's through she closed the door so many times, she's been played as a fool. At first he was a good person but now he's just cruel, he said if she would wait one day they would be together but she is moving on with her life. She can't wait on him forever, hopefully one day soon he will find it isn't nice to find the one you love being with someone else each night. She must admit the times they spent together were great, now he's grown into someone she doesn't know any more. He should have told her the truth from the very start instead of playing his game and breaking her heart. She hopes he regrets what he has done to her. When he said he wanted her she knew he lying, he had so many chances but he took too long, she feels better now knowing he's finally out of her life for ever.

    Sept 29th 2009

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    cmlestrade commented on Gone

    02-05-2010

    This is a very sad piece but it has been the case with so many who finally move on with life. A very good and insightful write.
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    patty24 commented on Gone

    10-07-2009

    This is a beautiful, sad poem, i like it...It remains me of a past relationship I had long time ago.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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