Full Moon Snap

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    • dragonfly1023
    • is thinking, once the tip is gone... it's pointless.

    Full Moon Snap

    The circle pulled tightly,
    the victim my witness.
    While held to the ground
    its grip was relentless.

    I stretched toward the light
    and prayed feet would follow.
    They sank in the pitch,
    in which I must wallow.

    Futile escape plan.
    Sprung inner trap.
    Remorse for the manner,
    and ludicrous actions...

    Full moon snap.

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    Insideme commented on Full Moon Snap

    02-20-2011

    I'm a lover of the werewolf legends and wolves in general, ever wonder what it'd be like to be one? Great write and subject!
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    Hampton commented on Full Moon Snap

    01-31-2011

    Very interesting and intriguing write.....................................Hampton
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    MrGee commented on Full Moon Snap

    09-10-2010

    Very well written poem. The rhythmn continues throughout and inspired me to write a poem entitled "My Prayer" Thanks for the read and a 10 from me.
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    Chaos128 commented on Full Moon Snap

    08-07-2010

    That's why whenever there's a full moon, I stay in the house : )
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    devaamido commented on Full Moon Snap

    04-18-2010

    Happens on a cyclic basis to all of us moons, doesn't it? If you think about it, it explains a lot !
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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