Flesh Huntress

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    Poem Commentary

    I am reading from proverbs "immoral woman" who tempts other man...And it really made me so inspired that I write this one...Wish u enjoy, and oh...I would really appreciate it if you will give me the correction about grammars in this poem...I know there are many but its hard for me to pinpoint especially the tenses...wish u help...thank you...

    Flesh Huntress

     The pricking sun starts to hide
    when the stars unfurl their cloaks
    The darkness starts to creep this evening
    Oh I can feel my spirit rising

    I stayed at the corner
    And concealed by the dim
    As I waited for them
    With a see through dress
    it reveals my fresh taut breast
    and flaunt my crescent hips

    Prowling, peering, peeping
    like the voyeur moon
    Scanning these passerby men
    with a filthy eye
    Ops, I spotted one!
    "Pssst, pssst, pssst"
    is an enchanting invitation
    from this lovely siren

    And I receive a glance
    With a wink of an eye
    he give in to mine

    In my bed I prepared
    sheets of smooth linens,
    rose spattered floors
    like a shattered virgin,
    Sets of burning candles
    weep my husband's leave
    but their lights celebrate
    my burning desires

    He perfumed me with his breath
    He oiled my body with kisses
    fluids dripping in my flesh
    Giving and receiving
    Warm bodies colliding
    Flesh against flesh
    as this fire we unleash
    Riding to pleasure
    till we reach hell's depth

    I'm a flesh huntress
    who craves for flesh
    I sling sweet talk
    and bait my body
    I need not snare
    for that is man's desire
    Don't dare to escape
    As I cast sin's net

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    raziel69 commented on Flesh Huntress

    07-16-2010

    This is another great one and I like the imagery you project; I can see this woman, smell her sex, feel the heat from her skin. Great job...10
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    simoneaugustus commented on Flesh Huntress

    03-19-2010

    Ah, we should all admire a woman who is unashamed of her sexuality and power! The 5th stanza did me in! This absolutely deserves a 20, but the scorecard will only let me rate you a10 :)
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    Rhymer commented on Flesh Huntress

    01-23-2010

    Enjoying this poem is an understatement. I do not have the words to do it justice. Inspiration from Proverbs? One never knows where inspiration will come. 10 from me.
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    EinStud commented on Flesh Huntress

    01-21-2010

    "And I receive a glance With a wink of an eye he give in to mine" It seems so natural and inviting. It is the way a man is lured by the woman, the eyes. It is like the spider casting her net, trapping the man for whatever her pleasure. Good read. Peace Out, EinStud .
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    devaamido commented on Flesh Huntress

    01-19-2010

    You got all of this out of Proverbs, at age 21? I'm gonna have to reread Proverbs! This too is an amazingly effective piece that evokes tactile, as well as conceptual perception. How do you do that? 10+++++!
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