A Heart on the Outside.

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    A Heart on the Outside.

     I can not stop it
    it goes on and on
    and over and over
    again and again

    My hate is on myself
    You can't understand why I feel this...
    This apathetic hell

    Don't try to tell me
    You'll just be wasting your own breath

    Count for me my darling
    You can't count on one hand
    All the times I sat and stared into my soul
    Cursing the feeling of myself being a Forsaken boy,
    Taking, Making, a deep and empty hole.

    Please try my dear
    Hear me clear
    This is my past and it is why I've brought you here
    Let it sting and be a memory
    Piercing your listening ears.

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    shakeme4life commented on A Heart on the Outside.

    10-31-2010

    likes this one , it reads very well , with a flow that allows me raise my voice and then lower than raise it again ..... great topic as well
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    poetlyrics33

    08/14/2011

    Thank you very much!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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