A Broken Past

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    A Broken Past

     Following a chaotic dream through the depths of an eternal waking battle.

    Listening to my heart take one more beat in an effort to enhance a slowly building haze.

    Silence comes and goes but never overcomes the clouded reacurring memories.

    Times aids the self induced torture of a lover's goodbye.

    Afterthoughts, hopes, and a once unyeilding faith begin to vanish.

    A soul burdened by grief stricken shadows from a slowly fading past finally heals.  

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    Qualin commented on A Broken Past

    07-24-2010

    a very different prespective.alot of potential I'll be reading you ....good write Qualin
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    jamie7121f

    07/25/2010

    Please do :) I'm always up for other peoples perspectives and helpful critiquing.

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